Logline:
Six Snowy Sheep disappear number by number into the snow.
London:
I like how there's six snowy sheep drinking hot cocoa on the last page, but I really cannot figure out which one is the one that shoveled them out. It is it the first one, the fourth one or the fifth one? It's not the one with the green hat.
Ben:
I like the way the book proceeds, with the repetition meant to aid young readers and the pentameter setting on thorny, tongue twister mode.
What it would be like to be in this book:
Ben opts to go first. "One word: COLD!" If London were the sheep that dug them out, she would just "get her best friend and her twin brother." (She'd pretty much just leave the rest, she contends.)
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